6.30.2012

click, snap, release clasp
the latch opened and i sprung loose;
bursting forward with the anticipation
of a future fresh and promising and
all the hope that nearly a lifetime
of waiting had pent up. fermented in
the waiting, powered with effervescent
energy, the wind rushing by, the bright
sky above held no fear. dreams realize.

pushing buttons at dVerse, and finding poetry!

11 comments:

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Not sure what you are dreaming about but...can I have some too?

Charity said...

Dreams are for sharing, and I have more than my share...it's addicting really!
: )

ordinarylifelessordinary said...

Fermented in the waiting, great line.

Claudia said...

love the energy of moving so enthusiastically into new territory...even more after having been waiting so long..

charleslmashburn said...

Somehow, the first line is audible, and as the poem continued, I envisioned someone jumping out of a magicians box; arms spread skyward; TA DA!
(Jeesh! My mind goes strange places sometimes!)
Wonderful poem.

Heaven said...

I like the burst of energy in your words powered by effervescent energy...may your muse continue to inspire you ~

Brian Miller said...

there is such a sense of freedom in this...at the release...and a great sense of hope....feel like skipping in fields of flowers...smiles...

Charity said...

I love this! I feel successful if you to were launched into a wondrous adventure by these humble words!

Charity said...

Thank you!
Effervescent = Champagne bubbles ; )

Charity said...

Hope... Is my daily bread!!!

thejuliebook said...

Great take on this prompt, Charity. Thanks for sharing!