nice short...could read this a couple ways...occupation more in the war time sense and prisoner...or just a man that has been worn down a bit and looks around to see what he's got for it...
This read to me like- 'occupation?'- the word being spat out...like the work on question is MUCH more than that
I thought of coffee grinds, when I read the line about the grind. I hate when they get in my coffee too! :)
Love how the words grab each reader in a unique way. More than an a job, or a prisoner, or just worn a way with time. Charles, per the coffee remark, we do have a "Daily Grind" coffee shop, though grinds in your cup are far from pleasant!
Interesting approach...very short and concise but also effective.
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