your first gurgling notes
the metallic clang of the bat
screeching bike tires
pencil chewing growls

notes at times monumental
and if i'm honest
at times monotonous

notes of an precious life
a song cut short
I miss you in every silent space
I will never stop humming your song


Brian Miller said...

lots of emotion, esp in that last bit...we will hopefully always remember them ...smiles.

jane hewey said...

beautifully worded sentiment. every silent space is potent.