Oh, this is good. I can see them talking, sharing hopes and dreams, making plans...
someday seemed more tangible, than today...perhaps in that there is hope, that tomorrow is just a bit better...
Mmmmm, yes - this is very evocative. I really like "their talk painting dreams." Lovely imagery.
I picture new love in this poem - trying its best to try and make a happy ending. Very well done.
sounds hopeful =)
There is hope....much hope! The funny thing is, I drafted this poem awhile back but never published it. Going through the drafts yesterday I stumbled across this poem ~ so perfect for where I am right now. It was so powerfully prophetic, the knowing in these words before this day had even arrived!
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